Thursday, May 26, 2016

Character Descriptions

We have been learning to write character descriptions that focus on internal and external traits. Have a read of some of our descriptions about Shrek.

SHREK

Shrek is an ogre, with fat green skin and trumpet ears. His clothes
are old and ripped, like a soldier after war. Sure he has kind looks, but the second you step in his swamp, you’ll scram from his anger management issues, and he will destroy you. Inside he’s gross and cranky with a selfish attitude. He’s clumsy and doesn’t clean up his belongings, which makes him a big mess. He absolutely HATES
everyone and he is sort of mature when it comes to what he laughs at. He is feared by most of the people, and has no respect for any of them. Though he is lucky he was able to get out of many tough situations. He loves his wife and kids even though his attitude isn’t the one of a caring person, a family man, as a green bean in soup.

By Andrew

Shrek

Shrek is as fat as a pig. He’s lazy and he only likes quiet. He gets as angry as a teacher yelling at you. He is as dirty as a week old mud bath.He thinks mad baths are relaxing . He has green skin and trumpet shaped ears. He wears the same clothes every day. He smells and he has a friend named donkey. He annoys shreck as much as your brother and sister annoy you.

By Nikora

SHREK
Shrek is a lazy careless boring ogre. He is loud when donkey is annoying him, but he is a quiet ogre when he is relaxed. Shrek loves to have a long mud bath. In his mud bath he loves to splash.When Shrek is done in his mud bath he loves to get changed into his old, ragged dark brown top and his same old pale brown pants. Shrek has pale brown teeth, skinny trumpet ears and dark green skin. In his spare time Shrek loves to play with his kids. Shrek loves his wife fiona and his kids to bits. Shrek lives in a small little cottage.

By Madi

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