We are learning to write a character description that includes external (outside) and internal (inside) traits.
Hayley!
A smart, intelligent and beautiful girl named Hayley is sweet sugar, as responsible as a teacher and as positive as fox.
This lovely girl has blue eyes, as blue as the sky and soft, curly blonde hair as bright as the sun. Hayley prefers to wear a black, leather skirt. She is as skinny as a pencil and looks classy with those dark sneakers. Hayley is adventurous and is active outdoors. Hayley is trustworthy, independent and as brave as a lion.
By Seema
RO,MON
Ro,mon is half kangaroo and half panda. She has two sisters and a baby panda. She has good skin and long legs with short arms and a long tail. She is purple green and pink, she has blue eyes. She is funny , bubbly, happy and sometimes angry and sometimes she is sad. She has a warm and soft heart and sometimes she is as sad as a raincloud.
By Paige
Murk
Murk is the craziest zombie ever to live in the swamp. He is Stupider than a log and he gets into random fights with hunters in The swamp. His knee always has a knife stuck in there because he’s Very unlucky. His favourite food is KFC, but he never gets the right thing because he can’t speak. He has never sobbed because he can’t feel pain. He is so green, you would think he was sick all day. The eyes are like the yellow of mouldy cheese. Their body is skinny so his teared clothes never fit. His feet are so wide and short. His hair is so bushy ,he can hide as a black shrub in the swamp. Murk’s nose is the most weird looking,purple nose ever, that you’d think that it got trampled by king kong. His ears and fingers are screwed up cause they’re broken.
By Andrew
